LEGEND OF TAL
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ABOUT THE SERIES
My most popular series, Legend of Tal is an epic fantasy adventure in a similar vein as classic stories like The Lord of the Rings and The Dragonlance Chronicles, but with the updated sensibilities of the Witcher.
It follows the titular character Tal Harrenfel and his apprentice, Garin Dunford, as they take on an immortal sorcerer and attempt to free the world of tyranny.
Tal must live up to his legend, and Garin discover his own power, if they’re to overcome the forces pitted against them.
THE WORLD
Long ago, the land of Aolas was transformed by the three deities known as the Whispering Gods. In an attempt to save mortalkind from the Night, the enemy to all the world, the Whispering Gods enacted the Severing, which separated the Origin people into multiple races, or "bloodlines," each adapted to their environments.
Millennia later, a new dark god has arisen. Yuldor, Prince of Devils, reaches across Aolas into the Westreach. Through his servants, the fell sorcerers known as the Extinguished, he has worked to undermine the civilizations of humans, elves, dwarves, and goblins.
The kingdoms are set to fall, unless one can ascend to challenge Yuldor.
THE PROTAGONISTS
TAL HARRENFEL
Tal is a folk hero to the people of the Westreach, thanks to the songs of the bard Falcon Sunstring. Hunched around a campfire, people tell his tales: how he stole a magic ring from the goblin queen, or saved the elven city of Elendol from a towering fire devil, or one of the many other stories.
Yet behind the gilded legend lie darker stories, and names to go with them. Magebutcher. Red Reaver. Death's Hand.
Stories are not always as they are told. Behind the legend lies a flawed man. But for all his shortcomings, greatness can be found in those who strive.
Now, Tal seeks to write the next chapter in his legend — and, perhaps, its final one.
GARIN DUNFORD
Garin has spent his entire life in the sleepy town of Hunt's Hollow, tending to his family's farm. Though his brothers and sister are content to follow in their parents' footsteps, Garin dreams of becoming like the folk heroes whose stories he's heard throughout his childhood. Heroes like Tal Harrenfel.
He's always felt different from those around him. His sister put the feeling to words, saying Garin has a fire within him, one that will burn him up if he does not feed it. He yearns to experience the world, and anything less will see him wither.
When Garin sees his opportunity, he seizes upon it. But the journey is not what he anticipated, and seeing it to its end may cost him his very soul.
ABOUT THE BOOKS
A KING’S BARGAIN
BOOK 1
The legend of Tal Harrenfel is sung across the Westreach — and with each telling, the tales grow taller. But though he’s declared a hero by his King, Tal has never claimed to be more than a man...
After three decades of fighting warlocks, killing mythical beasts, and hunting enchanted treasure, Tal has had enough. Running from the deeds of his past, he retreats to his home village under a different name and meets an unlikely companion: Garin, a village boy who dreams of making a name for himself and seeing the world beyond their sleepy town.
When Tal receives a mysterious visitor, both he and Garin are thrown into a journey across the kingdom. Soon, they become embroiled in the plots of monarchs, on the frontlines of an ancient war, and at the mercy of a fabled sorcerer.
Now Tal must live up to his legend, and Garin discover his own power, to survive the forces pitted against them…
Name of the Wind meets Witcher in A King's Bargain, an intertwining sword and sorcery adventure and coming of age tale.
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A QUEEN’S COMMAND
BOOK 2
The legend of Tal Harrenfel lives on, and a new song spreads across the Westreach. But as a devil inhabits Garin and old enemies and old flames haunt Tal, their victory promises to be short-lived...
Tal, Garin, and their companions survived the traps of one Extinguished at great cost, but their troubles have only begun. Garin having learned why Tal took him under his wing, the secret has broken them apart, even as circumstance and need force them to travel together. The roads to the elven realm of Gladelyl, once the safest in the Westreach, are rife with danger. And Tal is bound to the commands of the Elf Queen he cannot trust.
Upon reaching Elendol, the capital of Gladelyl, they find their troubles go further. With the gates to the East open, Elendol is in turmoil. The nobles strive for greater power, while the underclass and Eastern immigrants seek new rights. And all the while, an ancient enemy strives to turn them all against each other...
Now Garin must come to terms with his devil, and Tal with his challenges both past and present, before civil war tears Elendol apart...
AN EMPEROR’S GAMBLE
BOOK 3
The legend of Tal Harrenfel has a new, dark chapter to its legacy, and its hero quests alone into the East. But though Tal intends to end Yuldor's war himself, Garin and their companions follow closely on his heels...
Elendol is in ashes, and its queen has been replaced by one sympathetic to the East. Fleeing the destruction left in his wake, Tal leaves behind all those he loves in an attempt to save them from further harm. His aim is simple: find Yuldor and claim the Worldheart from him, no matter the cost.
But Garin and the others won't let Tal sacrifice himself so easily. Setting off in pursuit, they intend to offer what help they can. But not all the company's aims are the same...
The East is fraught with imposing challenges, formidable monsters, and dubious allies. And survival is only the beginning - for its Emperor has a scheme that may throw the World off its axis...
A GOD’S PLEA
BOOK 4
The legend of Tal Harrenfel has reached its final verse. But though Tal has embraced his gifts, and Garin has discovered his own, their greatest trials lie ahead...
Tal, Garin, and their companions begin their approach to Ikvaldar, the mountain atop which the immortal sorcerer Yuldor waits. Before they can challenge Yuldor for the Worldheart, however, they must first overcome Ikvaldar's formidable defenses.
Their quest will carry them into the heart of enemy territory. There, they will encounter their deadliest foe yet, one who may eclipse even Tal's towering potential.
The last battle is near. The legend is at its end. For Tal and Garin to remake the world, it will require sacrifice beyond their imagining...
A BATTLE BETWEEN BLOOD
A LEGEND OF TAL POST-SERIES NOVELLA
The Legend of Tal returns for one final battle...
Yuldor has fallen. The Westreach is safe from its false gods. But Gladelyl remains in the hands of traitors.
In the absence of Tal Harrenfel, it falls to Garin Dunford and his companions to take back the elven queendom.
But more rests on the outcome than the fate of one nation. For all of Aolas will suffer from this war among elfkind…
A Battle Between Blood is a novella set after the Legend of Tal series. Return to Aolas to experience the bloody civil war of Gladelyl through the eyes of Garin, Wren, Rolan, and Ashelia.
A Battle Between Blood also introduces the growing story universe of Tales of Aolas, which includes Legend of Tal as well as the upcoming prequel and sequel series.
A FABLE OF BLOOD
PREQUEL
The hunt for a god’s secret begins in blood...
Tal Harrenfel, infamous adventurer and living legend, has gone where none have dared before.
He has ventured into the deadly East, where beasts and lawless headhunters roam the mountainous lands, in service of a mission: to discover the secret to defying - and perhaps even defeating - the all-powerful sorcerer Yuldor.
Now he's near the tower where he suspects the truth is buried. With the help of the tower's mysterious caretaker, he'll ascend to claim its secrets - but what lies ahead is far deadlier than he could have anticipated...
AN EXCERPT OF A KING’S BARGAIN
BOOK 1 OF LEGEND OF TAL
As Garin watched the man dart back and forth across the muddy yard, half-bent like a raccoon, trying over and over to snag one of the hens and failing, he couldn't say he'd ever seen a better chicken farmer.
"Come here, damn you!" the man cursed as he chased the chickens. As they scattered, he made a grab, missed, tried again, and nearly fell face-first into the mud.
"Try approaching slower," Garin said, a twitch to his lips. "Not that an old man like you could go anything but slow."
The would-be chicken herder straightened and stretched his back with a groan. "Tried that. Still don't have a chicken roasting on a spit." He eyed Garin. "Maybe if a certain lad helped me chase them, we might both be chewing on succulent meat before the hour's up."
Garin pretended not to notice as his gaze wandered up to the sky. "Best hurry about it. Looks set to rain at any moment."
The man sighed. "Maybe the mud will stop them. Yuldor's prick, but chickens are degenerate birds, aren't they? What kind of bird can't even fly?"
The farmer stalked after the hens, a hand pressed to his side. He often touched that spot, Garin had noticed, like one might pick at a scab that refused to heal.
Garin shook his head and looked off toward the main muddy road through the town. The chicken farmer, incompetent as he might be at his chosen profession, had been the most exciting thing to happen to Hunt's Hollow in the last five years. Little else changed in their village. The seasons came and went; rains fell, and fields dried up; youths coupled against their parents' wishes and established their own farms. Life was trapped in amber, the same cycle repeated for every man, woman, and child in the village. The only thing to change in the last five years was the lack of deaths, for though the Nightkin beasts that came down from the Fringes had still been sighted, none had stayed long enough to attack.
His eyes turned toward the western tree line. Garin had traveled to all the other villages in the East Marsh, taking every opportunity he could get, but found them all the same, and Hunt's Hollow the largest of them, with its own forge and sharing its mill with only one other town. The World, he knew, lay with the rest of the Westreach.
I'll see it all and make my name, he promised himself. Someday.
His unfocused eyes were drawn by a figure approaching down the road. As the man drew closer, it became apparent he wasn't from any of the surrounding towns, or even the East Marsh. No wagon or horse — can't be a peddler. A wandering tradesman? But where he kept the tools of his trade, Garin hadn't the faintest idea, for his pack was small and slight.
As he came closer still, he observed how oddly dressed the traveler was. His hat, made of stiff cloth that was worn and gray and notched on the rim, was pointed and bent at the top. The long braid of hair draped over the front of his shoulder was black as a winter night. His chin was completely smooth and so sharp Garin reckoned he could cut a wheel of cheese with it. His clothes, like his hat, were well-used, but despite the many patches, they spoke of quality not too far gone.
A man of means, Garin wagered. Always best to be polite to a man of means.
"Welcome, traveler!" he called cheerily as the man came within earshot. "Welcome to Hunt's Hollow!"
"I read the sign on the way in."
He sounded somewhat irritable. But then, Garin reasoned, he must have traveled a long way. Opening his mouth to respond, he found the words caught in his throat. The traveler's eyes were shadowed by the wide brim of his hat, but he could detect a shining quality to them. Like staring into a forge, Garin thought before he could banish the boyish notion.
"Rain's blessing to you this day, stranger," he finally said. "A lonely corner of the World the roads have taken you to today."
The man cocked his head, the floppy tip of the hat tilting with it. "Not for long, I hope."
Garin kept his face carefully smooth. He was quite good at it, having had plenty of practice with Crazy Ean, who drank too much marsh whiskey and said things that could stiffen even an old man's beard.
"You'll be looking for a place to stay, I reckon?"
The stranger's gaze shifted past him, and Garin glanced back to see the chicken farmer approaching them. Somehow, he seemed changed, his shoulders back and posture upright despite his earlier defeat, and an unfamiliar hardness in his eyes.
"No," the stranger said. "I won't."
"Garin! Who's this you're keeping inhospitably in the mud?" The chicken farmer had reached his fence and leaned against it, wearing an amicable smile. But that smile… something about it made Garin suddenly feel he'd gotten in the way of two hogs who had their sights on the same sow.
"The boy has been accommodating," the stranger said before Garin could answer. "Silence pray that others in this town are just as kind."
"Oh, Hunt's Hollow is a fine town," the chicken farmer replied. "Peaceful and quiet. We like it to stay that way."
Garin swallowed and edged back along the fence.
The stranger turned his gaze on him. "Boy, I may yet take you up on your offer. Stay close by."
"No, that's alright," the chicken farmer said with his smile wider still. "I'm sure I could put you up if it comes to it. You get along now, boy."
If nothing else had his hairs on end, the chicken farmer calling him "boy" did. In the five years since he'd settled in Hunt's Hollow, the man had never been anything less than respectful to him, treating him as a man grown — which, at fifteen, he damned well was. A boy would run, he knew, but a man would stay.
"I'll stay. You might need someone to help you chase down chickens, Bran."
The stranger's eyes seemed more molten than ever as they turned back to the chicken farmer. "Bran, is it?"
"It is." Bran straightened, one foot still on the fence. "But I must have missed your name."
"I very much doubt that."
Man or boy, Garin was starting to think he ought to run for someone. Smith wouldn't be a bad man to have around if this came to blows. Though to look at these two, a bout wouldn't take long to settle.
Bran looked to have forty summers to him, from the crinkles around his eyes, and the dark tan-going-leather of his skin. But he had broad shoulders for a man of his middling height, and a chest and arms to rival Smith's, which Garin guessed he hadn't earned through chasing chickens. Then there were his tattoos, and the scars they covered. Bran always wore long shirts, even in the heat of the day, but Garin had glimpsed them: the bright colors, the strange, scrawling patterns, the puckered skin running beneath them all. The scar on his side looked the worst of them, and he often caught Bran clutching at it as if it pained him still. And his hair was streaked with white and gray so that Garin had occasionally teased him by calling him "Skunk."
Bran had been a soldier once, Garin had no doubt. Though, if his swordwork was as good as his chicken herding, he wondered how the man had survived.
The stranger, meanwhile, was slight as a scribe, and though tall and weathered, he didn't have a visible weapon. The match, he decided, could only sway in one direction. Except he couldn't quite shake the feeling that things didn't cut as straight as that.
Bran, quick as a snake in the brush, leaped over the fence to stand before the stranger. He tilted his head up to meet the other man's gaze, a slight, crooked smile still on his lips. Garin tensed, waiting for the strike that must come.
"Well, Aelyn Cloudtouched, He-Who-Sees-Fire, I'd hoped I'd never see you again. But since you're here, how 'bout I offer you a glass of marsh whiskey and we talk like old friends?"
"Like old friends," the stranger replied. "Or old enemies."
Bran shrugged. "Conversation is only interesting with animosity or amorousness — or so the bards sing. Follow me, it's not far."
Bran turned his back on the man. From the look in the stranger's eyes, Garin half-expected him to strike at the farmer's back. But instead, he followed him down the fence toward the small house at the end.
"You too, Garin," Bran called behind him. "If you've seen this much, our guest will want you to witness the rest."
"As if I'd have done anything else," Garin muttered as he tailed behind.
* * *
Bran settled in a chair across from his guest and smiled like they were old friends.
The house was nothing to look at, he well knew: two rooms large, with a ragged curtain separating them; a small wood stove settled behind him, and a well-used pot and pan, travel-ready, hanging above it. As rain began to patter against the roof, the usual leaks started up in the corners.
He didn't care to impress folks, not anymore, and this man least of all. But he'd helped his guest over the stoop like a nobleman might usher a lady into his bedroom, and ignored the man's protests that he needed no assistance in a similarly lofty manner.
Gallantry, he'd often found, suited a liar like a cape fit a king.
Garin squirmed in the seat next to them, but Bran paid him no mind as he took his glass and threw it back. He sighed as the liquid burned its way down his throat to settle a steady warmth in his gut. "Say what you want about Crazy Ean, but he makes a damn fine whiskey."
"So says anyone mad enough to try it," Garin muttered.
Bran grinned at him. "Life is short and dark as it is. May as well brighten it with a few glorious risks."
The youth shrugged.
He turned his gaze to the guest again, who hadn't touched his glass. "I know your name, Aelyn, and you know ours. The table is set. Now lay out what you want, or we'll have to settle on beans and roots for dinner."
Aelyn hadn't removed his hat, but even with his eyes shadowed, they seemed to gleam. "You know what I want. I'm not idly used as a messenger. But I obey my commands."
He lifted his hand to reveal a small, shining band resting in his palm, then set it on the table. Garin stared at it, mouth open wide. Bran found he was unable to resist looking himself, though he knew its kind well. Not a ring of silver or gold or copper, but milky white crystal, with a steady glow from within its clouded center.
"What is it?" Garin asked, sounding as if he wished he hadn't spoken but was unable to resist.
Aelyn didn't answer but kept his steady, orange gaze on Bran, like a raptor on a hare.
Bran sighed. "It's a Binding Ring. An artifact of oaths that holds the wearer to a promise."
Garin might be a man grown to the villagers, but he looked a boy at that moment, his eyes wide, his mouth forming a small "o."
"Like… a magic ring?" the youth ventured.
"Enough of this!" Aelyn snapped. "Take it and put it on. We must be returning immediately."
"Off so soon? But you haven't touched your drink."
The man snorted. "If I wished to poison myself, I have a thousand better ways than that human swill. Don that ring. Now." His fiery eyes slid over to Garin. "Or do you want the boy to know your true name?"
Bran studied him. A feeling, hard as flint, was starting behind his eyes. A feeling familiar as a distant memory. A feeling he'd hoped to have dug a deep grave and buried in the past. As it rose, a warmth unconnected to the whiskey began coursing through his body. Dread? he mocked himself. Or anticipation?
He reached a hand forward, finger brushing the crystal. It was warm to the touch. From past experience, he knew it remained warm most of the time. So long as the wearer kept to what he was bound. If he didn't, a mountain peak in winter would be preferable punishment.
Aelyn's eyes watched. Wary. Waiting.
Bran scooped up the ring, vaulted across the table, and shouted, "Heshidal bauchdid!"
The man jerked, then stiffened in his chair, eyes wide with surprise, hat knocked askew. Bran took his moment, snatching one of the smooth hands and slipping the ring over a long finger.
As Aelyn shivered free of the binding, his mouth stuttered, "Bastard of a pig-blooded whore—!"
"Quiet down!" Bran shouted over him. "This I bind you to: That you will wear this ring until I am safely back in Hunt's Hollow. That you will tell no one that you wear this ring instead of me. That you will tell no one my true name unless I bid it. And that you won't harm the boy Garin or myself in that time."
The ring shone brightly for a moment, and Aelyn shuddered, eyes squeezed shut, teeth braced in a grimace. A moment later, the ring dimmed, and Bran released his guest's hand. As he settled into his chair, brushing back the hairs that had worked loose of his tail, his blood began to cool again.
"Now," he said as he reached for the whiskey bottle, which had fallen over in the struggle, and pulled out the stopper. "You sure you don't want any of this human swill?"
The man raised his hand and stared at the crystal ring, horror spreading across his face. "She told you, didn't she? She told you my true name."
Bran poured a glass, then proffered it to the youth, who stared at him as if he were the stranger. "Feeling mad enough yet?"
Garin took the glass, threw it back, and promptly coughed half of it back up.
"There you are, Garin, there you are," Bran said, thumping his back. "You'll learn to swallow it all before long."
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